piosenki

elfik;)

wydaję mi się że dużo młodzieży pisze piosenki
Ja tez niedawno zaczołem
i pomyślałem że miłoby było poznać opinie innych (nieznajomych bo wiadomo jak ktoś cie zna i lubi to prawdy ci nie powie)

Atu jest idealne do tego miejsce
więc dzielmy się

VersaEmerge:)

no ja też dopiero zaczynam Wink

więc ty pierwszy elfik Wink

pokaż swoje dzieła

elfik;)

tyle że ja bym miaj jeszcze jedną prośbę
jak ktoś jest dobry z angklika to prosze zeby mi poprawił błedy
bo mi jakoś po polsku nie szło i po angielsu zacząłem

VersaEmerge:)

dobra spoko Wink

pomogę

elfik;)

O DZIĘKI
TO JUŻ SIĘ BIORĘ DO PISANIA

elfik;)

bo ja pisze na translatorze
wiem głupi pomysł
wcześniej to mi moja natalka tłumaczyła
ale się hyba fochnęła i 3wgl mi nie odpisuje
szmata Smile

elfik;)

1.I am surrounded by a crowd of people
their faces do not say anything
it seems to me that they do not feel
but this is not true
They are different. I do not understand them

ref. I want to be among (people) ...
I want to find even one person
who thinks and feels like me

I want to be among (people) ...
I want to find even one person
at which I will not need words

VersaEmerge:)

ja tu nie widzę żadnych błędów Wink

jak ktoś ma bystrze oczy to poprawcie mnie Razz

a co do piosenki to jest super Very Happy

naprawdę jedna z najlepszych jaką widziałam Very Happy

elfik;)

hahaha
no starałem się pisac dosc prostym językiem żeby błedów gramatycznych nie zrobic
dziękuje

elfik;)

no to czekam na rewanż

VersaEmerge:)

jak coś napiszę to od razu tu wstawię Wink

Lungs

hahah dział w sam raz dla mnie xD
jak ktoś sobie przywłaszczy to J*bne

1) Line Until Survive
she lived in a world which no one knows
This place was dirty and ruthless
so why did she live? couldn't she just let go ?
line waiting ...
in her mind there was only one sound
his heart beat, miss him
even without knowing why
She was looking for this sound which could only
Listened to the beating hearts of strangers
but still couldn't find
still couldn't find

He didn't know about her
didn't know that she needs him
lived his life
more colorful than hers
Will he never know she's there?
Confined in a cage waiting for this one
He didn't know about her
didn't know that she needs him
lived his life
more colorful than hers
Will he never know she's there?
Confined in a cage waiting for this one

Finally they met
came up with each other on the street
looked at each other's eyes
and she instinctively listened to the beating of his heart
Stopped
It was the sound of which she was looking for
but he didn't know what to do

she cried all night
Otherwise, she imagined this meeting
so why did she live? couldn't she just let go ?
line waiting ...

He didn't know about her
didn't know that she needs him
lived his life
more colorful than hers
Will he never know she's there?
Confined in a cage waiting for this one
He didn't know about her
didn't know that she needs him
lived his life
more colorful than hers
Will he never know she's there?
Confined in a cage waiting for this one
she was afraid of death
but she did it
despair won
collects the bloody loot
line until survive

and he understood her look
He wanted to find her, to apologize
He was looking for years, as she was looking for him
Finally he found her
He looked at her grave
and his heart beat for which she lived
stopped beating

He didn't know about her
didn't know that she needs him
lived his life
more colorful than hers
Will he never know she's there?
Confined in a cage waiting for this one
He didn't know about her
didn't know that she needs him
lived his life
more colorful than hers
Will he never know she's there?
Confined in a cage waiting for this one
she was afraid of death
but she did it
despair won
collects the bloody loot
line until survive

line until survive ...
line until survive ...

2) Let the night never ends

Let me feel how it is when you have no control.
Time goes by and we're dancing
the rhythm of the song we don't know
Nothing else matters
around are people like us

Let the night never ends
Your arms are like a wall
that no one can destroy
Our thoughts are one.
I feel we are close,
but I don't know your name
We're here to use each other
You shouldn't believe what I say,
because it could end badly

I'm fussy
everybody knows it
I kissed him and left
in the crowd lost in music
you're not, whith which I'm going to spend this night
So who will it be?
So who will it be?
I don't see anyone who deserves to me
I pass from hand to hand
and can't find this feeling

Let the night never ends
Your arms are like a wall
that no one can destroy
Our thoughts are one.
I feel we are so close,
but I don't know your name
We're here to use each other
You shouldn't believe what I say,
because it could end badly

I don't know what you want from me
catching me on the street
asking me about that night
wanting my answer, which you never hear

Let the night never ends
Your arms are like a wall
that no one can destroy
Our thoughts are one.
I feel we are so close,
but I don't know your name
We're here to use each other
You shouldn't believe what I say,
because it could end badly

na razie tyle mam ich więcej ale nie chce spamować

elfik;)

a mogłabys po polskiemu bo ja nic nie reumiem??

Lungs

nie mam wersji polskiej
od razu pisze po angielsku

elfik;)

ale hyba wiesz co to znaczy??
więc w czym problem napisać